I loved the disjointed feel to this and how it fits with her mindset at the time.
"Your grief is like a magnet." He tells her and she should have realized it was all her fault. This line particularly got me. Wow, I *Feel* that hurt of hers, you know?
Lovely! (PS this was on a friends delicious page if you are wondering why the late comment!)
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Date: 2007-12-16 06:21 am (UTC)"Your grief is like a magnet." He tells her and she should have realized it was all her fault. This line particularly got me. Wow, I *Feel* that hurt of hers, you know?
Lovely! (PS this was on a friends delicious page if you are wondering why the late comment!)